Tuesday, 8 February 2011
It Was a Dark and Stormy...Blogfest Contest!
Indeed, I'm just in time to participate in this Blogfest, hosted by Brenda Drake. Thanks to Shayda for alerting me to it with her own entry! :D
Anyway, here's my details:
Name: Patricia Farnan
Title: SQUEAKY MCLEAN AND MOUSE TAILS
Long, long ago in a city called Mouseratten, a hulking figure made for a rather scary sight.
Yes, I decided to go with a novel I'm not really working on that vigorously right now, because I'm happier with its opening line than I am with most of my other novels' opening lines. Haha. Though I must admit that I may be discarding my entire first chapter of this novel in future. Anyway...
There you go! Easy blogfest, simple rules, lots of fun. Now I'm off to read other people's first lines. :)
Okay guys, here is my current revision:
Long, long ago in the city of Mouseratten, the hulking figure was scaring the fur off any who saw him.
Tell me what you think!