tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-238481189278119116.post8201140722655717446..comments2024-03-10T16:45:38.711+08:00Comments on WORD + STUFF: Race to 200 Blogfest!Trishahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16927558937796802496noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-238481189278119116.post-77930118360538360592011-03-08T11:44:37.980+08:002011-03-08T11:44:37.980+08:00Thanks guys, glad you liked it! I like the protag ...Thanks guys, glad you liked it! I like the protag too, actually :D he's the kind of kid I can respect! :)Trishahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16927558937796802496noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-238481189278119116.post-81539889255146592832011-03-08T11:42:27.468+08:002011-03-08T11:42:27.468+08:00Love the opening lines! I swear I went to high sc...Love the opening lines! I swear I went to high school with these guys, but sadly I bet there's a lot of this type floating around out there. Really loved the humor and the protagonist.Witless Expositionhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07455282931743006892noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-238481189278119116.post-72183025899965613772011-03-08T00:56:48.808+08:002011-03-08T00:56:48.808+08:00This made me think of back to the future 2.This made me think of back to the future 2.Buddhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17142269413009487783noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-238481189278119116.post-31004904753279814532011-03-07T12:05:16.430+08:002011-03-07T12:05:16.430+08:00Hah. This is funny and well written! I enjoyed rea...Hah. This is funny and well written! I enjoyed reading it.Kyria @ Travel Spothttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05889638304509763419noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-238481189278119116.post-40596896403551999802011-03-07T10:21:50.720+08:002011-03-07T10:21:50.720+08:00I really enjoyed reading this, Trisha, as I know m...I really enjoyed reading this, Trisha, as I know many such dicky "friends" and it hit home. Thanks for participating in J.C.'s contest!____https://www.blogger.com/profile/15998491890518228876noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-238481189278119116.post-75333252892740955492011-03-06T14:28:55.859+08:002011-03-06T14:28:55.859+08:00Thanks guys, glad you enjoyed. :)Thanks guys, glad you enjoyed. :)Trishahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16927558937796802496noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-238481189278119116.post-57452122719163997342011-03-06T13:32:51.575+08:002011-03-06T13:32:51.575+08:00Hmm, my post didn't make it! I loved your int...Hmm, my post didn't make it! I loved your introductory paragraph, and John rocks! The ending was awesome. (Can I repeat that John rocks?)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-238481189278119116.post-16800639311938454372011-03-06T11:44:06.157+08:002011-03-06T11:44:06.157+08:00Hey Trisha, I too like your writing style. Thx for...Hey Trisha, I too like your writing style. Thx for the link to Evil Editor, I think...<br /><br />Great first line...<br /><br />I'm not sure if you've read mine yet...<br /><br />Have also got a relaxing post on L'Aussie today...<br /><br />Denise<3<br /><br /><a href="http://flashquake.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Race to 200 contest entry</a>Denise Covey https://www.blogger.com/profile/07106490051555233439noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-238481189278119116.post-92208744273687982272011-03-06T10:58:45.157+08:002011-03-06T10:58:45.157+08:00I cracked up with your first line....
You write n...I cracked up with your first line....<br /><br />You write no-nonsense.Michael Di Gesuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17047267262428143113noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-238481189278119116.post-58770417098163987942011-03-06T09:23:38.901+08:002011-03-06T09:23:38.901+08:00Michael, no worries - it was maybe a little harsh,...Michael, no worries - it was maybe a little harsh, but having received much more harsh critique in the past, I took this one pretty well :D<br /><br />Thanks to everyone else who stopped by, glad you enjoyed the story :)Trishahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16927558937796802496noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-238481189278119116.post-74317139536805677182011-03-06T01:51:12.166+08:002011-03-06T01:51:12.166+08:00Hi, just to see I've been by to read your entr...Hi, just to see I've been by to read your entry! Thanks again for participating, finalists will be announced Friday 11th! :)J.C. Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01567971311643106302noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-238481189278119116.post-32973503874332070092011-03-05T21:14:37.397+08:002011-03-05T21:14:37.397+08:00Great characters. You could write a whole novel ab...Great characters. You could write a whole novel about BrendanAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-238481189278119116.post-52294493914374797062011-03-05T08:50:45.062+08:002011-03-05T08:50:45.062+08:00Excellent short story. You sucked me right in!Excellent short story. You sucked me right in!Anny Cookhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05305873753916213970noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-238481189278119116.post-87764450674406564032011-03-05T03:04:52.559+08:002011-03-05T03:04:52.559+08:00"absolutely dicky friends." Too funny :)..."absolutely dicky friends." Too funny :) Great short story!Jesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14121018905141253640noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-238481189278119116.post-74598172629164998112011-03-05T02:26:42.126+08:002011-03-05T02:26:42.126+08:00Nice story! You're right, Brendan is a dick. ...Nice story! You're right, Brendan is a dick. :)<br /><br />DanDanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01103849952547613477noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-238481189278119116.post-70652195111640951042011-03-05T01:10:04.290+08:002011-03-05T01:10:04.290+08:00Great short^^.
Always have to take what people s...Great short^^. <br /><br />Always have to take what people say with a grain of salt eh?Crystal Collierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03912469552483168148noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-238481189278119116.post-76560815486317735212011-03-05T00:20:12.276+08:002011-03-05T00:20:12.276+08:00Thanks for posting that link to the Evil Editor. A...Thanks for posting that link to the Evil Editor. Although the criticism is harsh, I can see the point of said "Evil Editor" and cronies and just reading what is pointed out there makes me look at my own query letter with a more attuned eye. Much luck in revisions! :)Michael Offutt, Phantom Readerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10557969104886174930noreply@blogger.com